- Smartphones Shipment
- Smartphones Shipment to tip past 1 Billion in 2016
3. Article Source: 1 pt.
4. Summary: 2 pt.
- The smartphone total for shipments. But there is only 7 billion people on the earth.Tells how your phone is your new computer.The IPhone 5 will make the shipments go up to 567 million. And is expected to double by 2016.
- I was shocked at how much money we have used on smartphone shipments.And it is expected to double maybe even triple by 2016.This could put us further into debt and that will not be good. I can't believe how many more shipments the Iphone 5 is going to make.Ten years from now i think it will be worse.
6. World Impact: 6 pt.
- if the phones start not to work or function right,then the customer will refund it.Then the owner will lose money and will be mad.And if they are stolen from them they are not going to buy them.I wouldn’t buy it because those who don’t want to pay for it are probably going to steal it.So i think it is going to be chaos when the Iphone 5 comes out.
I like that you though a step ahead and said what you think could or will happen.You should remember to capitalize your I's. I think you should put "If the Ipones don't work" instead of "If the phone start not to work"
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-yuliana